Friday, July 17, 2009

Ancestry I



I'D LIKE TO KNOW

I'd like to know why there's so much criticism
Why the harsh focus - do we know no other way

Where and when were we loved as children
Our parents were loved as children weren't they

Did their parents disappoint them
Did their parents know they disappointed them

I'd like to know I didn't disappoint my parents
I'd like to know I didn't disappoint my children

I'd like to know if my parents' parents' parents know I loved them
I'd like to know if they know I love them still

I'd like them to know, my future progeny, they've my prayers to realize their failures
and my prayers to realize their successes

I'D LIKE THEM TO KNOW

Collage by SS - "Geisha"
Poetry begun at "Awakening the Creative Spirit" Workshop May 2009
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4 comments:

  1. Abbey of the Arts10:19 AM

    SS, I am loving all of these poems from the Awakening retreat. Might I have permission to use this one in our Awakening book? xoxoxo

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  2. Dianna Woolley11:00 AM

    Christine, Absolutely, I am honored by your request.

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  3. Kayce aka lucy11:23 AM

    i know this reaches broader and wider than "our" ancestry, but my oh my you have captured it well. that is what great poetry does...

    thanks for sharing this.

    xoxooxoxo

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  4. Dianna Woolley2:34 PM

    Lucy - thank you!!

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